After looking at our first Script draft our group definitely thought that we had to add more detailed information.
After meeting up with the Young Lives Foundation, we discovered that it would not be impossible to film one of our case studies, Aaron, due to him being under 18.
Luckily as our other case study, Louise was over 18, she was able to give her own consent and agreed to be part of our documentary.
We first took out the key points we wanted to add from Louise's story and put them in, but after that we couldn't decide on where to put Holly's and Stephen's interview in.
While me and Sophie were struggling, Roxanne and Aimee helped to us go through the script to see how Louise's story could be structured by adding where Stephen and Holly's interviews could go.
They showed us some notes that our tutor Helen, gave to them to help with their structure and because they were doing their documentary on a charity as well they were happy to us out. They gave us the notes they used to see if this would help us at all.
Here is what we ended up with.
After meeting up with the Young Lives Foundation, we discovered that it would not be impossible to film one of our case studies, Aaron, due to him being under 18.
Luckily as our other case study, Louise was over 18, she was able to give her own consent and agreed to be part of our documentary.
We first took out the key points we wanted to add from Louise's story and put them in, but after that we couldn't decide on where to put Holly's and Stephen's interview in.
While me and Sophie were struggling, Roxanne and Aimee helped to us go through the script to see how Louise's story could be structured by adding where Stephen and Holly's interviews could go.
They showed us some notes that our tutor Helen, gave to them to help with their structure and because they were doing their documentary on a charity as well they were happy to us out. They gave us the notes they used to see if this would help us at all.
Here is what we ended up with.
As we had already written out transcripts from our interviews, it made it easier to look through Holly's and Stephen's interview on what they could talk about. We were able to find the places within the script, so that the documentary wasn't all just focused on Louise.
Me and Sophie haven't completed the commentary, however in the places we knew there would be commentary we put points so that we know what we would have to write/talk about.
We are still in the process of getting enough cutaways to fill in between commentary and the interviews.
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