Friday 14 November 2014

Script - First Draft 'Kent Life News'

Here's our first draft of our 'Kent Life News' script:



After writing up our script, we wanted to show Helen so that we could get a second opinion.

She said that the pats where our reporters go more into depth with the museum and the knitting for charity stories are great however we need to re-word, the intro parts to the stories as she feels that were giving away too much information about the stories and instead tease them.

We are now going to work more on the script and see if we can make these changes as soon as possible as we have our shoot dates coming up very soon.

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